The old Chapter 1 was a bit narrative heavy so I came to the conclusion that it needed some dialogue to perk it up. The trouble is the opening scene was a single character getting ready for his friends to arrive for the esbat. However the saving grace was a reported phone call that he later describes. So this is what I’ve added.

“Hello?”
“…”
“Oh hi Geoff, how’s things?”
“… …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … … … …”
“Really?”
“…”
“Good grief!”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … …”
“Your model village?”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … … … …”
“Casinos?”
“… … …”
“Cowboys?”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … …”
“Vegas?”
“… … …”
“Blackpool!”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … …”
“Indians? What, with war paint and all that?”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … …”
“Chain Mart! You mean the little everything-shop where you buy your beer?”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … …”
“Uh huh.”
“… … … … …”
“Uh huh.”
“…”
“… …”
“… … …”
“… … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … …”
“Are you stoned?”

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